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The melody is great, but the effects killed it :'(
The distortion and bass doesn't fit the track, but I like your choice of synths for the melody :) good job though!

VizuOffical responds:

Thanks for your response. I also feel like the bass is too harsh on this. I will try to improve. Also, I am working an a way calmer track then this, stay tuned ;)

The intro is nice, melodies are fantastic, good choice of synths. But there are some areas in need of improvement, such as mastering, transitioning and effects. Tip: for a intro drop add some filter and a little bit of sidechain for a intense feeling :)

Other than that, you've impressed me :)

Skybrid responds:

Wow, I didnt expect that someone will leave a review, and so good, thank you very much! I am relatively new at making audio in FL studio, I will surely use your advices in the future!

Eh, it's okay.

The drums are nice, melodies are fantastic and for someone your age, you've really impressed me :)

Though there are somethings to work on like the mastering, background noise and transition. I really like your choice of synths. You've earned my respect!

P.s Why did you put that you're 33 when really you're 11? :/

NGBaronAwesomeness responds:

i put 33 because you have to be 18 or older in order to be in Newgrounds. and the year 1982 just kinda pops out to me.

anyways thanks 4 your thoughts on my song bro!

The intro was nice, I liked it. The drop was ok, the bass drums are too low, too much autotune was used and not much variation in melodies, but I can clearly see effort put into track :)

All I can say is keep practicing, your doing great! :)

Steve28 responds:

I can agree with the low drum, because I did -25hz to kick drum to make it more heavy :P Also, I did almost no variation cuz I loved the melody so much (what?)...Thanks for your feedback tho!

What do you mean 'autotune' by the way? If you're talking about the pitch-correcting effect, I didn't use it...

I don't understand what I'm hearing... did you put any effort? (I feel like you didn't)

For drop vocals, add some reverb(not too much)and lower the volume to have it vibe in the background :)

sharpnova responds:

That sounds like a bunch of nerd talk.

I'll wait till I know you've seen this then delete your review hehehehehehehehehe :)

It's decent but I think it'll pass :)

4.5 / 5

thVTA responds:

Apreciate that. Thanks!

Aqui no puedes subir esta cancion, estas violando las reglas aqui. Solo puedes subir canciones que TU has creado, le puede prohibir :(

Ruzat responds:

Vale es que andaba probando y me dieron de ejemplo de esta cancion pero ya desaparecera

It's not bad, but you do have some things in need of improvement (like transitioning, repetition and using less LFO, and using less sidechain)

But you've impressed me :)

Imthatkid10 responds:

Wow, Thanks, I Will Try To Do That. And Thanks For Listening.

It's a little repetitive, but it's not exactly your best

PandaThePanda responds:

It can only get better from here ;)

Good track, good vocal. It just needs more variation in the instruments, just piano won't cut it :)

Dr-Thallium responds:

Thank you for the feedback! Were you recommending adding something atop the piano, like strings or synths?

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